You are working for a company. You need some time off from work and want to ask our manager about this. Write a letter to ur manager. In ur letter . explain why you want to take time off from work. . give details of the amount of time you need. . suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to request you two weeks off from work in the coming month. On the 21st

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2018, my sister is entering into conjugal relation and being the most adored child, my parents want

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event to be blissful.

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event demands my presence,

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to follow certain traditional rituals

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compelling me to request

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leave starting the 15th until 29th August 2018. I can anticipate your concern regarding my work, which will be well organized and any deviations could be managed by the assistant manager. I do not have specific commitments during

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period;

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could

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be contacted via phone or email for any emergency.

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would be grateful if you could generously grant me

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time, providing me

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opportunity to turn

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occasion into a memory of our

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lifetime

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life time

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delivering joy and happiness to my sister. Thanking you Yours sincerely, Vishwa

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

156 words

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