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Scientist predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

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An increasing number of population in the
world
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 people talk to their region in their own
language
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. In my opinion,
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 is negative development which can lead to
unemployement
the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
,
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,
 Many
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language
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languages
 will disappear in the
world
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.
One
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 serious problem that can raise from people is
unemployement
the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
 because
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 country people may have more knowledge and technology. They
can came
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can come
 into your county and get
job
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the job
a job
easily wherelse
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easily, whereas
easily whereas
 own
citizine
a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community
citizens
 of the country will be jobless or doing small jobs with less pay. Another issue having a common
one
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language
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 will destroy other region own
language
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for
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For
 example, If we take
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 as a global
language
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 will destroy other
language
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 like
french
of or pertaining to France or the people of France
French
,
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,
spanish
the Romance language spoken in most of Spain and the countries colonized by Spain
Spanish
 etc.
no
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No
one
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 in the
world
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 will accept to completely shut down their
lown
belonging to or on behalf of a specified person (especially yourself); preceded by a possessive
own
long
anguage
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
engaged
 and asking them to learn new
one
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.
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, Everyone
have
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has
 to
strugle
an energetic attempt to achieve something
struggle
 hard to learn
one
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perticular
unique or specific to a person or thing or category
particular
language
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 and education have to be must so that all the person will know about that
one
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language even
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language, even
 though after learning they will be like a fresher and that global
language
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 speaking country people will be the master and ruling the
world
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. In conclusion, For
upcomming generation introducing
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an upcoming generation, introducing
an upcoming generation introducing
upcoming generation introducing
one
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 global
language
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 in schooling all around the
world
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, Only teacher
have
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has
 to teach everything because parents have no idea about that
language
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beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
 of
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 only few student will
sucessful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
successfully
 in their education and most of them will be
failure
Suggestion
a failure
.

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