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with ease of e books comes the decline in paper books. some people see this as a good forward while others do not. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend

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Paper
 is the main material used for writing and printing literature, newspaper, magazines. With the advancement of
technology these
Accept comma addition
technology, these
 papers were replaced by electronic books. In the minds of some personnel
this
 is a good improvement, while others do not. In these paragraphs
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 discuss the advantages and disadvantages of these advancements
To begin
 with bright side, these
e
 books come in handy and decreases the burden of carrying
paper
 books everywhere. These
e
 books can be compiled in a folder or tablet to easy to carry.
For instance
, while
u
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
 are
in
Suggestion
on
 a journey it is difficult to carry
number
Suggestion
a number
 of novels and magazines with
paper
. These
e
 papers
also
 have
a
Suggestion
an
 option to read during night time without
requirement
Suggestion
requiring
 of lights. There will modulation of
intrest
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
interests
 towards reading in gadgets for kids.
On the other hand
, there are some
unpleasent
disagreeable to the senses, to the mind, or feelings
unpleasant
 consequences as well.
Firstly
, there will be
lack
Suggestion
a lack
 of some satisfaction which we can feel during the turning of pages in physical
paper
 books. These
type
Suggestion
types
 of pleasure cannot be experienced in
e
 books.
Secondly
, longtime reading in these
e
 books
also
 effects sight of our eyes. In conclusion, while there are plus points to having a ebooks but these should not replace entire
paper
 books.
paper
Suggestion
Paper
 books should be continued for
further
 generations

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