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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following ways of learning a foreign language. State which you consider to be the most effective. •studying on your own •taking lessons with a private tutor •taking lessons as part of a class •taking lessons online •going to live in a country where the language is spoken

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The world we live in is more connected than ever. Learning how to speak a foreign
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 has become an increasingly important skill for those who
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 business outside of their own country.
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 there are many ways to learn a new
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, some are certainly more effective than others. The essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of some of the most common
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 of learning a new
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.
Although
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 accessible to many, self-studying or taking lessons online have many
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 for those who are seeking to learn a new
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. There is very little
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 for those who are trying to learn a
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. It is
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 almost impossible to practice essential oral skills
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 as pronunciation in an individual setting. Taking lessons as part of a class,
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, is accessible for all who
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 to study a new
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, and provides excellent
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peers.
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 the teacher might not be able to provide enough individual attention for each student to succeed.
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 expensive, private tutoring can provide students with attention that no other form of learning can.
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, it is easier for the student to ask a question in a one-on-one setting, than in a classroom. Its main downside is the price. Generally speaking, it is more expensive to get a private
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, than to study alone or take an online class. One of the more unconventional
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 of learning a new
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 is to live in a country where it is spoken.
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,
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 method of
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 downside. For one, it is significantly more expensive than all the other options. Plus, without
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basic
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 skills, it is impossible to get
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 for new learners. It might,
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 learning option for more advanced speakers who
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 to challenge themselves and experience
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 culture. Personally speaking, I feel like taking private lessons with a
tutor
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 is the most effective way of learning a new
language
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. A private
tutor
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 can provide
feedback
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 on essential
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 more expensive than most other form of
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 learning, a private
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 is definitely more efficient.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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