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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work?

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According to psychologists
colour
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 can affect feeling of people and
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 attention should be given to
colour
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 schemes when we decorate places
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 as office and hospitals.
Colour
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 influences not only peoples' health
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 capacity for work. I strongly agree that
colour
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 plays a very important role and have a deep connection with a human mind.We can change the environment of some place just changing the
colour
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 of the area.For an example in an office, we should decorate with
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colour
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 which make the place more energetic and professional where as in hospital, we should use some light
colour
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 which keeps our mind calm and make the surrounding more peaceful which is very necessary for those patients who are admitted in the hospital.
Colour
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 can enhance people capacity to work for an example, it is more attractive to keep bright
colour
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 in the workplace where it will give some positive energy to the workers and make them more productive in their work.Not only outside in our own house we should decorate our room, according to our requirements,
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 We should use bright pink or blue
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 in our kids room so that kid always feels cheerful where as we should apply light colours in our bedroom to feel relaxed at night. In conclusion
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Yes it is true that the mood of people will change
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 with the
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 of the environment.We can make some place more significant by a choosing proper
colour
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.It may you feel sometimes happy and sometimes sad. Always we should keep
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 in our mind while decorating any
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 places.
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