Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the present, people are living in modern

life-style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

lifestyles

and upgrade with new generation or new trends.

That

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That's

our new youth has believes the history is not important to live in that current

time

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Also

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, in the past the many

situation

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situations

was created but

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were created, but

were created but

the young people

has not accepted

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have not accepted

those things. If asked to support, I practically believe that statement and will

elaborated

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elaborate

further

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. Generally, our youth are most of information that they do not trust to work in the futures because they have not aware and it’s

also

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believes

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believed

in the present situation.

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, in the past all mankind

has

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had

unexpectable

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experience that

wok

exert oneself by doing mental or physical work for a purpose or out of necessity

work

on the future.

For instance

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, student had to study in their

life but

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life, but

some

time

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they have to feel it is worthy.

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, in the school life they had to study about the basic knowledge

of they have to

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they have to

study in futures

also

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its not

worthy

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worth

for them.

Thus

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, the past learning is more important to new people.

On the other hand

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, some

time

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they are right about past think to not value in

future

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the future

;

However

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, past learning is worthy for present people.

Additionally

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, current generation

believe

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believes

in change with new trends and

life-style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

lifestyles

For example

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, In the past

time

Use synonyms

people

are communicating

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were communicating

with latter and

birds but

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birds, but

in the recent

time

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young people accept the new technology

that is

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batter

something superior in quality or condition or effect

better

for communication. So, the past is not perfect for the today’s human. To conclude, most of people

are not accept

Suggestion

are not accepting

don't accept

do not accept

history but

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history, but

some

cases they

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cases, they

have to believe and some other type on they cannot trust in past learning because they habited to the new orientation. In

this

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my opinion, both situations are important

for

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these days.

Fri Feb 14 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

284 words

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