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Smart devices have put all of the world’s information at our fingertips. What are the drawbacks of this development?

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In today’s world, the technology has developed to a great extent providing people with advanced smart devices. The technology has compressed the whole world into the smart devices. But with
this
 progress came
along many
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along, many
disadvantages including
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disadvantages, including
 
the easy
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easier
access
 to everything before appropriate age and misuse of medications. The younger generation, who is more into using these gadgets including mobile phones and laptops without parental supervision are prone to indulge in activities and places above their age limit. According to recent research specialists, 96% of our internet comprises of dark
web
 and the
access
 to dark
web
 is present
in side
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
inside
 bars
of
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on
 the 4% surface
web
. The dark
web
 can invade any home, enticing teens into porn, drugs and gambling.
Thus
, parents should be aware of their children’s activity on these smart devices. The easy
access
 to information about diseases and medicines has made people a doctor of their own. Unfortunately,
this
 has turned out
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to be
 a disaster for society
instead
 to
being
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be
 beneficial. Today we can find ample of research articles stating the prevalence of misuse of over the counter
drugs resulting
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drugs, resulting
 in adverse effects on a person’s life. Misuse of medicine as basic as paracetamol can cause kidney damage and liver failure. So, we should always be aware of how to interpret the available knowledge and to what extent we can handle things ourselves. Conclusively, the straightforward
access
 to everything provided by smart devices is certainly not healthy for teens. The guardians should be vigilant and have a complete control over the amount of internet
access
 by their kids. At the same time, adults should not self-diagnose and self-medicate themselves. The companies flaunting their latest gadgets should take more responsibility of making
this
 venture a positive one for every being.

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