Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

Artificial
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Artificially
intelligent robots playing crucial roles in current globalisation, some people think that some occupation is done by robots.
while
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While
some jobs are
possible
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possibly
to done
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doing
by robots, unlikely few
occupations human
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occupations, human
interaction with the robot is essential.
This
essay will discuss why eventually only few jobs will be done by a bunch of people. Without involving the people, Robots can easily handle and do some small occupations. Large companies showing interest in Artificial Intelligence Robot rather than spending on people because it is less expensive and efficient, it reduces the time complexity.
For instance
, in
restaurants most
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restaurants, most
of the servants replaced by the robots which is reluctant the employees and cost
also
far less than the employee's wages.For these reasons, some jobs can be replaced by the Artificial Intelligence robots. In some
cases people
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cases, people
should monitor and give directions to the robots to do the tasks.In military based areas, it is very important to monitor the robots and always keep an eye on robots because military based areas contain full of hazardous materials.Robots
also
need to give some training and practise to handle on the dangerous materials
.
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.
For example, japan
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Japan, for example,
have automated
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has automated
the nuclear reactions in
turbans but
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turbans, but
in one case system
have showed
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has shown
the error
,
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,
because of no interaction with human nuclear turbans have exploded.For these reasons, robots very vital to interacting the people and always monitor and direction to robots. Ultimately, very few jobs will be safe for humans and be
help
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helped
helping
to humans, so it's better to use Artificial Intelligence Robots in
such
cases.

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