the first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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energy
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consequently
its greenhouse gas emission in an Australian household.
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Overall
, there are six different typologies, namely heating, cooling, lighting and other appliances.
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it is clear that
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, with 42 per cent and 30 per cent respectively. Use synonyms
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, heating results less harmful Linking Words
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greenhouse
gas emissions, with only 15% compared to 32% of water heating.
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its air pollution effect is almost doubled at 28%.
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Finally
, the remaining three features, namely refrigeration, cooling and lighting represent together just under a quarter of the totalò of Linking Words
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, refrigeration alone reaches a percentage of co2 emission of 14% Linking Words
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cooling and lighting have a proportion of 3% and 8% respectively.Linking Words
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