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Some people believe is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #information #research #business #world
It is well known that
information
 is a valuable asset for every
industry it
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industry, it
 is considered a competitive advantage in
business administration reason
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the business administration reason
 why people take special attention when it comes to sharing to others.
However if
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However, if
 the
information
 would not have been shared throughout the years the human race might be living still in the stone age.
Firstly copyright
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Firstly, copyright
 laws
allows
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allow
 industries to protect their knowledge and sell it to the
public providing
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public, providing
 a business model that recompense for the effort done to discover a new patent,
this
 scenario stimulates the development and research area to foster for the
next
 big milestone. Money is the main reason to protect the
information
 going into the public scenery.
In
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On
 the other
hand
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hand, information
information
 shared freely can get anyone to make use of it and the community encourages to develop a new project using the free
information
,
for example
 an open source code language, the fact of being free is going to involve more people putting effort to learn and apply knowledge acquired.
Moreover
 converging people´s work using free
information
 in turn will result
on
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in
 a better built solution because as long as other communities are involved and shares the output conclusions are built based on different point of views. In conclusion the
information
 should be protected on a competitive environment to stimulate the production
on
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of
 new
knowledge but
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knowledge, but
 it is important to create nonprofit initiatives to allow well-constructed results that may benefit to a greater extent. In the long term we have to discard the
discover
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discovery
 of
information
 just on a money
motif but
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motif, but
 to share freely in order to obtain solutions that could be better suited to the needs of the modern and
developing world
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the developing world
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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