Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. "Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up." To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the given phrase the writer

is generally arguing

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has generally argued

about how a

father

should take equal

responsibility

of bringing up the

child

just like mothers do. It is often seen in our society that fathers are most likely ignorant about their children's

upbringing

. In our society, mostly the

responsibility

of the children

put

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puts

on the shoulder of a mother. For

housemakers

sometimes it seems

easy

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easier

to handle a

child

alone but

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alone, but

occasionally she

also

faces criticism regarding a

child

's

manners

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manner

. Whereas mostly working women

also

deal with these types of tantrums on a daily basis. People set their minds that it is the sole

responsibility

of a lady to handle the

child whereas

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child, whereas

men are free in

this

regard.

Child

upbringing

is not a piece of cake. A mother needs equal support from her family and from the

child

's

father

. But in some societies

father

completely denies to take up even half of the

upbringing

for his

child

. These types of men often assume that their only job is to do work, earn and

then

feed the family. But in reality, A

child

always needs his

father

's attention

too

in the direction of

to

. It is equally important for both men and women

For instance

, news circulated about how a

father

disown his son because of

misbehavior

improper or wicked or immoral behavior

misbehaviour

. A

child

often gets aggressive when he doesn't find any attention from his

father

and

as a

result these

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result, these

types of news

rumored

gossip (usually a mixture of truth and untruth) passed around by word of mouth

rumoured

around our surroundings. In some areas around the world,

gynecologist

a specialist in gynecology

gynaecologist

suggests parents take classes for children

upbringing

. Those educational classes with experts broaden their horizons. On these types of classes, expert

guide

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guides

the couple to the basic principle of how to look after their

child

. It

also

develops a sense of

responsibility

on both the parent. From the recent researches, it is proved that 75% of enrolled parents shared their load of works and help their

child

to grow

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grow

in

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into

a better and peaceful environment. In my opinion, A

child

is a

responsibility

of both parents. Through the help of

counciling

postpone indefinitely or annul something that was scheduled

canceling

counselling

cancelling

classes regarding parenting the misconception of mother only job can be change

positivley

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positive

positively

. By these concept our environment can become

more calm

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calmer

and reliable and our

child

grows with a healthy mind.