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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

#parents #teachers #support
When raising a kid, the child's
education
 is considered by many parents to be one of the most essential aspect.
However
, there has been some debates recently regarding who is more competent at teaching children. Personally, I think that while parents certainly have the most influence on their children's life, they might not be the best at teaching their
children
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child's
 essential skills
such
 as reading and writing. Almost all those who are in the
education
 field have received a college
education
, while some parents who comes from more impoverished backgrounds might be significantly less educated. It would be hard for these parents
to teach
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teach
 their children more advanced topics.
For example
, it would be difficult for these parents
to teach
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teach
 their child concepts
such
 as calculus and physics, whereas a schoolteacher would have no difficulty explaining these topics to the students. Another disadvantage parents have
is
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been
 their lack of teaching skills. It is more difficult for parents to teach their children without a proper training in
education
. Whereas most teachers have received competent training in teaching.
For example
, teaching young kids can be frustrating. It is easy for those who are trying to teach to lose patience, especially those with little experience in teaching, while a professional with lots of experiences might try different teaching methods to adapt to the student's needs. In conclusion, I personally think that while parents have a great influence on their children, professionals are much better suited
at
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for
 teaching them.
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