The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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This
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chart represents the category of men, women and children who daily consume five portions of fruits and vegetables in UK during
period
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the period
a period
between 2001 and 2008. It is shown that women are the most fruit and vegetables
consumer
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consumed
compared with men, whereas children have the lowest percentages for the whole period.
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, it is clear that less than 50% of people ate five portions of fruit and vegetables in those years. Women percentage increased from 2001 to 2006 from about 20% to more than 30%, after which it
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decreases
to beyond 30% in 2008.
Men
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Mean
percentage can be classified as almost constant with about 16% during
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three years, after that it increased to about 28% in 2006 and 2007, and had
small drop
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a small drop
in 2008. The same trend of men can describe children with lower values, that rise from around 12% in the 2001, 2002, and 2003 to a peak of
little bit
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a little bit
more than 25% in 2007, and dropped to less than 25% in 2008.

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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • regulate
  • traffic congestion
  • pollution
  • public health
  • sustainable development
  • alternative forms of transport
  • car ownership
  • balancing benefits and drawbacks
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