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Some people prefer to work the same type of job throughout their lifetime while others like to change the type of job they do. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Change
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 is a perspective of
life
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 and transitions happen in each phase of
life
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. There are some people who adopt similar
work
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 for whole
life
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 while others move from
one
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job
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 to another after some duration. In my opinion, I believe that
change
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 is essential in order to enjoy the
life
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 and sticking to only
one
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 type of
job
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 for entire
life
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 causes boredom so people should switch their profession from
time
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 to
time
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. There are many reasons that employees stay in the same
job
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 all their
life
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.
Firstly
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, they get
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job
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a job
jobs
the job
 of their own choice and are enjoying while doing the same kind of
work
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 so
job
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 satisfaction is the predominant reason that workers do not want to
change
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 their
work
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.
Secondly
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, individuals are getting enough salary from their current
job
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 that they meet their both ends and are able to save some amount for
emergency
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emergencies
an emergency
, so they do not have to
change
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 their
job
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for
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of
 getting more income.
Finally
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, people are satisfied with the working conditions in their company
for example
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, calm and peaceful environment to
work
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, friendly colleagues, supportive manager, getting appropriate hike
etcetera
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, so there is no reason for them to shift their
job
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.
On the other hand
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, some employees want to gain knowledge of different fields so to have exposure to various domains, they
change
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 their profession after some
time
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. Beside that some of the workers are not happy with their current
job
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 due to the factors like not getting proper appraisal, not doing
work
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 of their own interest, team members are not friendly, rude nature of manager and list goes on and in
such
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 situation that person get stressed out and try to find new company immediately.
In addition
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 to that, some individuals get bored by doing
same kind
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the same kind
 of
work
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 for a long
time
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,
that is
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 why, they prefer to switch from
one
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job
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 to another. In conclusion, I would like to say that transition in professional
life
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 is necessary. With the advancement of technology, methods of
doing
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getting work
has work gotten
was work getting
doing work get
work
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 get changed and today is an era of automation so people should remain updated and shift their career as per the demand of present
time
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.
Moreover
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,
transition
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the transition
 is important for refreshing
one
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's mind and mood because people get exhausted and frustrated by doing
same type
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the same type
 of
job
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 for entire
life
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.

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