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Some people think that money is the best gift to give youngsters, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays
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in
this
 new era the humankind
think
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thinks
 that
cash
 are the best present in young people
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while the other told that it is not good.In
this
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 would discuss the views
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and some of my opinion that the foremost offering
gift
 of the
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
 the
money
 are not important.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
 that the youngsters they know the value of the good moral and they know love and affection are the most important largess. To commence with
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to show a
presentation
 of the young
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currency is not
neccesary
absolutely essential
necessary
unnecessary
 because they have so many
option
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options
 to give a present to their children.For an instance, the barbie doll is the best largess for the girl
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and the robot toys are for the boys in
this
gift
 the youngsters are extremely happy.
However
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money
 is the best
presentation
 if the offspring
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are
need
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needed
 to pay
in
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with
 their
tuation
a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)
tuition
 pays in school.
This
 kind of present it is allowed to the children.
A part
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Apart
 from
this
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to give a
money
 present of the young people are better
also
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so that the youngsters how to know the value of the
cash
.But the
parents they
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parents, they
 need a guidance to their offspring.
This
 modern day the youngsters they know the trends of the society.
because
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Because
 of
this
 new technology they
are follow
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are following
follow
are followed
have followed
 the trend of their famous artist.
For example
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most of the time many young people are addicted of the styles of Korean artist.
Although
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other
countries
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country's
 youngsters are copying the latest trend of
this people
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these people
this person
. In result
this
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the young people they do not like to receive a material presents. In conclusion
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the young people now are
need
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needing
needed
 the guidance of the family
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so that they know the love and affection are the most
presentation
 than the
cash
.In my opinion
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children should know the past generation that the
cash
 are not a
gift
, if the parents give a largess to their offspring it is a high value.Young people now are essential to know the
money
 it is not important as a
gift
 but the love
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care and affection of parents are the most
presentation
.
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