some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for goverments to make it a legal requirements ? To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Recycle
waste
produce from domestic home becoming an alarming issue.
In addition
,
this
waste
had not been recycled which
government
closely monitor
Suggestion
closely monitors
and want
to implements
Suggestion
to implement
new legislation and laws to reducing the amount of
waste
. Governments should have to
revised
Suggestion
revise
their policies on the recycled
waste
and makes some improvements
this
policy,
Government
should not only give benefits whose recycled their
waste
, but
also encourage
Suggestion
also encourages
their work.
For instance
, In Canada
government
share their work which
help
Suggestion
helps
to recycle the
waste but
Accept comma addition
waste, but
also
make
video
Suggestion
videos
a video
and tutorial for others to motivate them and
safe
save from ruin, destruction, or harm
save
the
environment
. Apart from
this
government
also
initiate
awareness program
Suggestion
an awareness program
in which it
is show
Suggestion
is shown
shows
how the
environment
can be
affect
Suggestion
affected
by
this
waste
and if we recycle
this
waste
, we save our planet form
further
damaged.
Additionally
,
Government
also take
Suggestion
has also taken
some strict measure for reducing the
waste
in
first
place.
Firstly
,
Government
allocate
Suggestion
allocates
monthly limit for
waste
for domestic use and give them awareness about the impact of
this
waste
.
Secondly
, if their
waste
is exceeding the limit that house utility bill tariff is increased.
Finally
, if they did not change their
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
towards
waste
and they
continually going
Suggestion
are continually going
continually go
off their limit council will give them a fine. Overall, Governments should give them education about the
waste
and
also
strictly applied the law to prevent the
environment
from
this
issue. Everyone
also
takes part in
this
government
initiative to save the
environment
for our future generation and recycle the
waste
as much as possible.

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