Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I have left my hand luggage on your plane when I flew from London to Vancouver
last
week on 10th February at 1400 hours. I do not exactly remember the place where I left the bag,
however
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I think it is either in the cabinet at the top
or
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the space under the seats. I am sure that the
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handbag
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hand bag
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handbag
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was in my hand when I boarded on the plane,
therefore
it has to be at one of these places. The bag is an American
tourister
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one and is light grey in
color
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. It is a small suitcase, rectangular in shape and approximately 24 by 30 inches in size.
Moreover
, it has a sticker of Liverpool FC on it, which
my
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favorite
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footbal
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football
club. It contains some crucial official documents that I had to present
about
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in the coming week. It
also
contains some family images, which are not very expensive,
however
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it has a lot of personal value. I request you to investigate in your lost and found department about my belongings and inform me in case you are able to find anything. Looking for a reply from you as soon as possible.
Youes
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Yours
You
Sincerely John Thomas

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