Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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high competitive world
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a highly competitive world
highly competitive world
, most people think
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great way
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a great way
to share
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as much as possible in studies, career, and scientific research. While other thinks that a
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little
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is very confidential to share openly. I believe that in most cases sharing
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is
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the best
way of awareness about our society.
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, I think that people take negative effects from valuable
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like nowadays how science can misused against by man that cause undesirable consequence. Scientific
knowledge
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is neither good nor bad in itself. It is
man
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a man
the man
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a good or bad use.
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greatest misuse of science is its use for
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purposes
the purpose
of war. It has developed the fatal weapons like atoms and hydrogen bombs.
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Internet provides
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a wide range
of material that can easily
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access
with a few clicks. Young students spoil in academic dishonesty just copy paste their assignment without understanding the actual content even negative uses of cyber network. In
business people
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business, people
start to
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hack
the personal
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like accessing the account details, credit cards and money transfer. But it depends on
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the person
people
whom they take the
information
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as positive or negative because without
knowledge
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person cannot survive in
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world. Sharing
knowledge
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helped to achieve our
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desired
goals in the career, even enhancing our learning skills inside the communities. It helps to develop the
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decision
power in any situation and how to behave and help our society. In conclusion, there
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knowledge
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knowledge, although I
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I believe that the possession of
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without the ability for action was
may be
by chance
maybe
the greatest immorality people might commit.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collaboration
  • accelerates progress
  • innovative discoveries
  • transparency
  • open access
  • verify results
  • fraudulent
  • ethical practices
  • consumer trust
  • potential risk
  • misuse
  • sensitive information
  • genetic data
  • defense-related technologies
  • proprietary information
  • trade secrets
  • competitive edge
  • value
  • investment of time and resources
  • compensation
  • disincentivize
  • recoup costs
  • balanced approach
  • policies and agreements
  • sensitive data
  • fair compensation
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