A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion
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last decade
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group believes that animals should not be endangered by humans, while some others point that human needs are more important and people should be allowed to use animals for their different purposes. Linking Words
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addition, scientists
biology
experiments on animals to find cures for illnesses.
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biological
animals’
species have been extinct because of exploiting them by the human. Actually, they believe that the God has created animals to live and human shouldn’t kill them or destroys their Suggestion
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life
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By contrast
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better human life
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law that always the stronger kill the weaker for continuing the Use synonyms
life
and in the forest, wild animals kill other for food as human do it for his purposes. Use synonyms
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, human should exploit animals for food, clothes and to develop the science and no other Linking Words
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can be taken.
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a sophisticated issue and both of views are concerning one aspect of human and animal rights. But perhaps, the realistic solution is balancing human behaviour about animals. Put another Linking Words
way
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