A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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It has been argued that people should not take advantage of animals and animals should have rights like
human being
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a human being
human beings
. Whereas, others agree that animals should be exploited to full fill various needs
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as foods and experiments use.
This
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essay will look at both sides and give an opinion. A convincing argument can be stated that extinction of animals may occur if people are still exploiting it.
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, as we know, many people do not concern about animals and they likely take advantage of animals with their willingness.
This
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will lead animals to the extinction.
For example
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, in china, many people killed china's indigenous chicken to use its skin for making cosmetics in the past. At the moment, that animal has become extinct and data have shown that only 200 china's indigenous chickens are still alive. Another side, animals have many advantages to
humans which
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humans, which
we
can not
can not
cannot
live without them. Foods and development of
medicals
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medical
product have been done by animals.
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, people must exploit
animals
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animals, although
although
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they do not want to do it. For an Instance, in Siberia, once, there had been famine because animals in there are prohibited to kill. That really showed that people
can not
can not
cannot
live without it. Overall, In my
opinion I
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opinion, I
agree that we have to take advantage of animals.
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people don't have
willingness
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the willingness
to exploit animals, they must exploit it. It means that people
can not
can not
cannot
live without it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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