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Advantages and disadvantages studying in universities

#universities
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Nowadays, studies in
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university
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the university
 are the huge improvement of the youngsters for their future and
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 is popular in every country. In
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 essay I will discuss, the merit and
dismerit
a mark against a person for misconduct or failure; usually given in school or armed forces
demerit
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 statement. Studying in huge
university
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 the young people have a high demand, and good performance when they come to find a
job
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. While they have
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 competitive in applying work to the famous company. To commence with the
adavantages
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
advantage
 of studying in
institute
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the institute
 the students
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having a satisfaction about their knowledge and they enhance their skills. Because in
university
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 the most professors there are smart and intelligent. For an instance, the teacher of the law, doctor, engineer, and architect.
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courses
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course
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is
 popular in the universities and
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 is
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easy
 to hire in all
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companies
.
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, the schools are higher in their tuition fees and not all adolescents are studying.Because not all parents having a good
job
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 to support their offspring to
study
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 in large school. In
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 part education in
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a huge institute
 they have
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 disadvantages, because of high
financial
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finance
 that young people need to pay in exalted price. In
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 modern day children are lucky to
study
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 in
university
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, because of elevated learning in
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 new era.
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, the youngsters who leaving in the rural area, and their parents
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don't have
aren't having
 a good
job
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 and high salary it is the huge dilemma in
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 new time. Because not all family have a good life and young people are going to
study
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 in school.
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, in
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 new era have a good way to studying in
university
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 for the help an agency and government. In conclusions, youngsters
are learn
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learn
 in universities have a good and bad impact, but the children need to learn it. In my opinion,
study
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 in
institute
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the institute
have
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has
 a huge help for the new generation to achieve their future and to find their dream goal as well as to find their
job
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 satisfaction.
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