In many places, new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

It is believed by individuals that growing population within urban

cities

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city

demands for more housing capacities. More attention is

diverting

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diverted

towards turning nearby countryside’s to housing societies in order to provide the citizens with comfortable homes.

However

, in my opinion the major pitfall of

this

step is deteriorating the environmental conditions of the suburban areas, which are being highly ignored at the expense of adjusting the residents. Some people believe that important environmental factors are being neglected while making housing spaces.

For instance

, turning a countryside into a residence society requires a lot of

deforestation which

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deforestation, which

in turn causes danger to wildlife, increase in global warming and dramatic changes in weather making that location inhospitable

to

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of

the animals and the humans.

Furthermore

, development of

such

areas

also result

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also results

has also resulted

is also resulting

in fossil fuel

emissions creating

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emissions, creating

smog, polluting the

water which

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water, which

leads to gastric diseases

by

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from

contamination and it

also

causes CO2 emission which increases pollen production and in turn reinforces the allergies. To illustrate, China is the most developed

country but

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country, but

most of the citizens use

masks outdoor

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masks, outdoor

masks outdoors

masks outdoors outdoors

to cover their face in order to avoid the polluted oxygen and a potential disease that they can get infected with.

However

, it is believed that it’s important to create housing capacities for the residents which is somewhat

true but

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true, but

this

problem can be tackled by making some compromises, by the government and by the citizens.

For instance

, several high-rise buildings can be constructed within the urban cities to make more space for the growing population,

although

the lifestyle will not be the same compared to living in a house with a lawn, but as a fact at

this

stage the avoidance of effecting environment holds immense significance than any other matter. To conclude, it is important to create more capacity for the growing

population but

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population, but

not at the expense of our environment. It’s the responsibility of governments around the globe to educate everyone about the contamination of

environment

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the environment

and to encourage

lifestyle

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a lifestyle

that is

environmentally sound.