In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you sug?

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to notify you of my concerns about my current roommate, who is making

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stay in the college hostel difficult. I am having unavoidable and unmanageable problems due to her activities and those are impacting my study badly. My name is Mary Smith and I live in room L-202, which is shared with another student. My previous housemate was rational, extremely cooperative and inclined to

studies

Suggestion

study

However

, my present roommate is a polar opposite and have frequent parties in which he plays loud music in the wee hours. He is two years senior to me and I cannot protest her irrational behaviours due to which

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studied are being hampered. I would prefer anything quiet. My semester final is approaching and I would like you to shift either me or my roommate to another room. I do not mind the room type as long as it is quiet and favourable for studies. Thank you very much for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Mary Smith

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0Word repetition
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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Topic Vocabulary:

parental guidance
influence of media
aggressive behavior
overcrowded classrooms
inadequate facilities
classroom management
conflict resolution
behavior education
parental involvement
reinforced at home
student psychology
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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you sug?

Fully explain your ideas

The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools. Do you agree with this prediction?

In some places old age is valued, while in othe cultures youth is considered more important.Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people do not go directly to college but travel or work for a short time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local habitants and the environment. however, others claim that it is good for the economy. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.

In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both sides and express your opinion.