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The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools. Do you agree with this prediction?

#internet #course #books #schools #prediction
Some believe that the Internet is the ultimate source of knowledge regarding the majority of subjects. Others say that books can never be replaced by any means, especially in educational institutions. Being an IT specialist, I know the
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 and cons of both points of view, which I will present
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 the end. Traditional books have
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 generations of children and have
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 to be an effective source of wisdom for pupils. The incredible amount of
information
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 the centuries is yet to be digitized. The best minds of the
world
 have done tremendous work to create and preserve
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 into
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courses
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 to pass on to their
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On the other hand
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 the
information
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, in software application development and social media marketing the approaches used 5 years ago no longer yield optimal results. Traditional
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course
source
 literature can’t remain up to speed with the constantly changing
world
. And even if it could, it takes too much time to sign off and approve new material in Ministries of Education in every country all over the
world
. Having said that, the Internet is often
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criticized
criticised
 over the
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 of
information
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 could have false evidence and misleading facts. In the
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 scenario it could do more harm by feeding the young generation lies that they would take for granted. To
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 up, I stand for string validation of
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 the government issue formally approved
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