Some people think that human needs for farmland housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals .Do you agree or disagree ?

In the contemporary era

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people have

number

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a number

of needs and to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

those

needs they

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needs, they

need farmland

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housing and

industry but

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industry, but

some of people claim that saving

land

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for endangered animals are more

importand

of great significance or value

important

than human being needs. I believe that

human s

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human

humans

needs are very essential as

campared

examine and note the similarities or differences of

compared

to saving

land

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for

endangered

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Endangered

animals

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To commence with

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there are numerous

reason because

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reason, because

of its

respobsiblity

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of

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

to give

first

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priority to human

requiarments

required activity

requirements

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of all

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farming is very dominant for growing crops and

food

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so to do farming

land

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is very important

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if there will no

land

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for farming

than

subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)

then

there will be

reduction

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reduced

in

food

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production and people have to depend on other countries because they will have a less local

food

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in many

counteies people

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countries, people

countries people

moving to

metropolitan area

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the metropolitan area

as a result

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population of

urban area

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the urban area

urban areas

is increasing

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are increasing

and inhabitants face

household problm

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the household problem

household problem

household problems

and

also

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face problem related to pollution due to

this

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reason

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thus

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authorities should provide them more

land

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where they can live and can

constuct

make by combining materials and parts

construct

new buildings. On the

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

hand some

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hand, some

of people argue that we should save lands for rare animals because they help to maintain

ecosytem

a system formed by the interaction of a community of organisms with their physical environment

ecosystem

balance.

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orignal

preceding all others in time or being as first made or performed

original

form of

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food chain

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the food chain

a food chain

and ecosystem are broken due to the extinction of many species without a diversity it will bring a

nagative

characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negative

impact to

human

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the human

who is the top if

food

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chain.

In addition

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exitnction

no longer active; extinguished

extinction

of species will give a high risk of ecological disasters

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especially for

endangered

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Endangered

animals which

has

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have

benifits

financial assistance in time of need

benefits

to human animals an environment. To conclude

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although

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everyone has right to live on a

planet but

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planet, but

government should

first

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give priority to human beings

ans

in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

and

it is

responsiblity

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the responsibility

responsibility

a responsibility

of

human

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humans

a human

to save endangered species.