To what extent has the internet made life more convenient? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Today, online networking plays a crucial role to make people easier for living. In my opinion, we are using
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internet
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the internet
for many purposes in our daily life.
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of all, many teenagers and adults are using the net for communication.
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, they can easily get in touch with each other by using it from their phones or computers. The worldwide web can
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provide our current location or
information whatever we
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whatever information we
need.
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, some
elder
advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
people refuse to use the network because they can hardly find its advantages.
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, many youths are enjoying the
internet
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because of
entertainment
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the entertainment
. It offers varieties of shows, movies, music videos and comedies which can relax our mind for a while.
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, if I am fully stressed, I always search the Britain Got’s Talent from online to take away my worries.
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, education
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also need
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also needs
support of online. Students can find the facts for their research from the website.
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but not least, online network
also
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has side effects. A lot of people get blackmails from hackers.
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, health problems can occur while overusing the
internet
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. It is a common issue that we see happening in our society.
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, a recent study showed that several small regions in the brains of online addicts shrank by 10% to 20% and they got brain damage. To conclude,
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there are many benefits of the
internet
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which can make life more
comfortable but
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comfortable, but
we should have to set our limitation to control overusing it.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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