Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than it's advantages . Do agree or disagree ?

There has been a tremendous increase in the number of cars over the

last

few decades and

this

development has significantly affected the lifestyle of people. The biggest advantage of having a

car

is that people can go wherever they want whenever they are ready.

However

, some argue that the huge number of cars has critically impacted the human beings in a negative way. I do not quite agree with

this

view. In my opinion, cars have an equal number of merits and demerits. People who are

objected

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objecting

to having a

car

assert that the cars can deteriorate

air quality

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the air quality

. Too many cars

also

cause traffic congestion in cities. Most cars are driven by fossil

fuels which

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fuels, which

emit harmful gases like carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide. Even though scientists are trying to develop eco-friendly fuels, those technologies are still in the nascent stage and they may take many more decades to be available.

Nowadays in

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Nowadays, in

Seoul, Korea, the quality of air is so bad that wearing a mask is mandatory to maintain one’s health. On the flip side,

cars

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the cars

also

offer various benefits. They have made commuting easier.

Cars

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Cats

are particularly helpful in emergencies where getting to the destination in the least possible time is of utmost importance.

In addition

, the

car

industry generates many jobs and boosts the national economy. To sum up, there are merits and demerits to owning a

car

. In my opinion, cars have become an indispensable part of our

lives

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life

.

However

, we should bear in mind that overuse of cars will harm our environment. But we should bear in mind that our nature will be destroyed if we overuse the

car

. We should control the usage of the

car

for protecting our environment for the

next

generation