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Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued by some that constructing houses is not as essential as planting trees in vacant areas in cities and towns.
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 essay completely agrees with
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 viewpoint as trees reduce
pollution
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 and provide a peaceful
environment
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 to relax. Trees can reduce
air
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 and
noise
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pollution
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. As trees take carbon dioxide and release oxygen in the
air
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, it improves the quality of
air
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. Due to an increase in the number of vehicles in cities,
noise
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pollution
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 has
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 increased significantly. By acting as a buffer, trees can help in decreasing
noise
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pollution
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.
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, according to the Ahmedabad Municipal Association, a 50% improvement in the
air
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 quality was noted along with a significant reduction in
noise
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pollution
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 after planting 1 million trees in open land in Ahmedabad. Trees
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 provide a peaceful
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 in a stress filled world. The
environment
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 surrounding these parks and the fresh
air
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 improves the mental wellness of men and women and it encourages them to live a stress-free life. These parks can be developed, and various community events related to wellness like meditation camps, yoga
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an area that is approximately central within some larger region
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, and others can be conducted.
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, according to a survey conducted by Oxford University, people who resided near green parks were more likely to not develop stress than people who do not. In conclusion, by planting trees in open regions in urban areas can reduce
pollution
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 and provide an
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 to gain peace. It is recommended that governments should plant more trees in empty places in cities.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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