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Write about the following topic. Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays taking online classes on the internet becoming increasingly popular. Universities offering their courses on the internet so that people can study online.
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, there are both pros and cons of
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 type of courses.Here, I will discuss some of the reasons why online classes are so popular and some of the negative impact on students. Let's begin by looking at the positive development of taking online courses.One of the main advantages of taking classes online is you can take your classes from anywhere in the world.What I mean by
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 is that to taking classes you do not need to go to the universities.You can earn your degree from anywhere.
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, taking an online course, sometimes lead to better growth, in your professional life, especially those who are working and have not that much
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 to go to university For an example, few of my friends are taking online courses from the universities they want to do their masters while doing the job at the same
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, they can take their lessons any
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 even they can save that the lecture to see it in future. Turning to the other side of the argument, there are
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 few problems regarding online courses.Taking online classes make students more lazy and inactive. Sometimes they cannot complete their coursework within
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. Recent studies show that those who are going for actual classes have achieved more growth than the students who are taking online classes. Another issue is that in some courses you need much practical work. By taking online classes you will not get that real
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 interaction with your professor.
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 the reason sometimes students do no want to go for online courses for some special subjects. All things considered, taking online courses is a very good options those who want to grow in their lives.You need to weigh up the pros of
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 technical advancement and cons of other issues. Personally, I believe that benefits in terms of personal growth eventually overweigh any negatives.

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