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Machine translation (MT) is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. Do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words.

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There are so many languages used in the world. But due to various reasons like business or
travel we
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travel, we
 need
translation
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 of language. Some assert that machine
translation
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 can never compete with human
translation
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. I disagree with
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 statement and I will give some reasons and examples to prove my point. Google translate is one of the famous platforms used by many and it is increasing its accuracy over the time to make
itself
the thing named or in question
it
 at par with human interpretation.
Everytime
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Every time
 after using
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 application the user needs to give his feedback and is able to correct any word for better meaning. The feedback given by users is checked by the employees of google for mistakes.
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example, last
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 time I translated "love" in Japanese it resulted
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
 "like" but I could update the result and rectify it and now the sentence made sense. So with more and more people using it the data will become more accurate. Scientists are always inventing various methods of improvement of
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 by using artificial intelligence. Whenever we have our phone with us and doing human
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 it is recording all the data and understanding the mistakes available in its system. A research has shown the improvement in the quality of machine
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 by comparing the result of
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 now with 10years ago. The improvement is shocking. To conclude advancement in technology will definitely bring better results with
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regard
 to machine
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. Since it is not possible to have humans being in every situation
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 help, machines are the way to move forward and make life easier.
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