Some people say that it is alright to use animals for our benefit; others say it is not good to exploit them. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

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I passed my SSC exam from Dhaka

Division

and got

first

division

with three

letters

Suggestion

letter

marks in 1991. After that

refers to the speaker or writer

got admission to Kobi Najrul Govt college in

Commerce Department

Suggestion

the Commerce Department

and Successfully passed in HSC exam and

succed

attain success or reach a desired goal

succeed

succeeds

first

division

with two letters.

letter

Suggestion

Letter

on,

refers to the speaker or writer

completed

Suggestion

have completed

my post

graguate

receive an academic degree upon completion of one's studies

graduate

degree from Dhaka University since 2000, major in management. To be honest,

refers to the speaker or writer

would enjoy

versity

a British abbreviation of 'university'; usually refers to Oxford University or Cambridge University

varsity

life

very much as it was versatile

life

that led me to

practicle

concerned with actual use or practice

practical

life

Durning

Suggestion

During

that time, I joined in Butterfly Marketing

Compmay

Suggestion

Comp May

Dhaka as an Audit

officcer

any person in the armed services who holds a position of authority or command

officer

and

contuning

remaining in force or being carried on without letup

continuing

containing

life

till 2005. After that I moved to another job and engaged myself as

Merchandising profession

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a Merchandising profession

in 2006. I joined to Gomoti Textile and Apparels Ltd and got

proctical

concerned with actual use or practice

practical

knowledge from

factory

Suggestion

the factory

. Later, I moved to buying house in order to learn buying house skills. I gathered seven years practical experience in

apporch

any member of Athapaskan tribes that migrated to the southwestern desert (from Arizona to Texas and south into Mexico); fought a losing battle from 1861 to 1886 with the United States and were resettled in Oklahoma

Apache

merchandising.

This

experience later on created an opportunity to serve banking job. I have joined at UCBL in 2012 as Senior officer in

RMG

Suggestion

the RMG division

an RMG division

division

under corporate

division

. I am now working

this

division

for seven years and successfully got

essy

posing no difficulty; requiring little effort

easy

promotion on time by the grace of almighty Allah. At present

refers to the speaker or writer

am holding as an Assistant vice president in

this

company. I enjoy my job very much.

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221 words

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