Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Now a days
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it’s a difficult task to get a
job
, that might be of several reasons like
,
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apply
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individual talents, course they choose to
study
, demand by companies,
However
, students spend
enormous
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amount on their education, at the same way
universities
hike their fees every year, even though spending
large
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a large
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amount on studies, graduates are not sure in securing a good
job
.
As a
result
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,result
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some people argue that
universities
should only highlight practical degree courses to safeguard graduates to get
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a job
the job
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job
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not to teach arts
subjects
.
To begin
, Studies is just
a
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knowledge to gain
on
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in
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a specified field of our interest, which might be science, arts, commerce etc.
Universities
offer all the courses in which it is our priority to select the
subject
by ensuring which
subject
is best to get
job
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after completion of course, while some people just want to
study
the
subject
of their interest, while others
study
only to get a
job
in a
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well reputed
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company after studying, so we can’t criticize the
universities
to stop all the unwanted courses and only to focus on
job
oriented
subjects
.
However
, increase in population in
country
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the country
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, high competition among students, lack
in
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of
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knowledge might be the reasons of students who are not able to find a
job
, he or she need to survey on
subject
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the subject
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that they
won’t
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want
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to
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study
which can get a
job
easily. Even some people won’t be able to get a
job
after studying science, because
its
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depends upon
individual
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the individual
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to get a
job
, not the
subject
they
study
. To conclude,
Universities
can’t go with the specified
subjects
, it is a platform for all the
subjects
to learn, they can’t go with the
job
perspective. Studying
subjects
of interest varies from student to student,
Although
,
Student
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Students
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should be clever in selecting the
subject
of
study
if they expect a good
job
in future, not to blame
universities
to focus only on specified
subjects
.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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