Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subject like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Humans have achieved numerous milestones throughout their revolutionary process.

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, some regard

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as an important subject along with others in the curriculum to remark our kind's achievements and how they accomplished it. While the other believe that

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subject is anachronistic and irrelevant compared to modern courses. My essay will analyse both of the perspectives and demonstrate my own view at the end of the writing. It is no doubt that the subjects taught at schools

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as Science and Technology bring us practical knowledge to improve our lives.

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, the medical industry has continually prevented deadly diseases from breaking out, while countries like China, has earned billions of dollars every year with their modern equipments applied to production.

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, the development of technology has brought the humanity to the

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level of the revolution, wherein, when compared to the past,

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transportation and communication were rather sluggish than that of today's.

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, without

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subjects like the two mentioned would not be as developed as they are now.

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informs us about how our ancestors created one or other inventions.

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information has laid a solid foundation for our today's development.

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, antibiotics, which were discovered around the 1700s on accident,

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, to improve, the nowadays scientists need to conduct several researches to improve their effects on humans. In conclusion, both

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and present-day subjects can co-exist with each other.

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is rather boring at school classes, it provides the necessary details for us to keep moving forward.

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Topic Vocabulary:

crucial
comprehend
retrospect
gain insights
reflect on
sharpen
evaluate
significance
heritage
legacy
advent
breakthroughs
sustain
sustainability
revolutions
empowered
overcome
transform
advancements
collaboration
cooperation
diversity
fulfilling
promote
facilitate
prosperity
enhance
foster
foundation

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