Countries around the world will be faced by significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problem will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcomed?

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It has been argued that, nations across the globe will experience worries relating to education, population and not only environmental issues in isolation.

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essay will consider the challenges to be encountered in my country (Nigeria) within the

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decade, before proposing a possible solution to the challenges. Perhaps, the most important challenge to be faced in by my nation within the

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decade is the issue of overpopulation.

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is the difference in childbirth and death rate.

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difficulty will result in an increase in the poverty level, crime rates and a decrease in the welfare of the populace.

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, the world bank proposed that the populations of Nigeria will be over a billion by 2030 due to the increased in uncontrolled and unmonitored birth rate in my fatherland.

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, the mess of brain draining in my motherland.

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is the migration of field experts out of the territories, leaving behind the quacks to attend to pressing issues.

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, Nigeria Medical Association (NMA) along with Nigeria Bureau of Statistics (NBS) said, at least 5 medical doctors leaves Nigeria every one minute while proposing that by 2031, there will be no professional medical practitioners left in Nigeria. Fortunately,

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, there are many promising solutions to the drawbacks mentioned above.

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of all, effective implementation and enforcement of family planning can help to curb the impending setback of overpopulation.

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, enacting laws that encourage the use of family planning and forbids families from giving birth to more than three children just like it was enforced in China.

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, providing quality service condition with high wages will undoubtedly reduce the rate of migration of professional out of the country.

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, an IT engineer who left Nigeria because of low wages and poor working environment will have no reason to leave if he/she has a wage and the working state is almost equal to that of the homeland he's migrating to. In conclusion, with the setback of overpopulation and brain drain previously suggested as the main challenges to be faced by my birthplace over the

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decade, I will recommend that, family planning be implemented effectively and enforced and

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provision of quality mode service be made available to avert the impending predicaments

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sustainability
Ecosystem
Renewable resources
Urbanization
Demographics
Healthcare system
Pension crisis
Curriculum development
Digital literacy
E-learning platforms
Lifelong learning
Public policy
Biodiversity conservation
Green technology
Population density
Generational equity
Economic disparity

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Countries around the world will be faced by significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problem will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcomed?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Computers and A.I. technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

The youth crime rate is rising rapidly in many countries. What is the reason for this trend? What can parents and teachers do to solve it?

Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some University students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

One of the major problems that faces today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.