You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you are selling the television Describe the television Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it

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Dear Rohit, How are you

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time we spoke, you told me that you were planning to buy a television. I am writing to tell you I am planning to sell mine. As you know, I had applied for a course at the University of London. Fortunately, I got accepted for it and I will be flying on the 23rd of

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month.

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, before I go, I am planning to sell off a few things which include

this

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television as there won't be anyone to use it after I leave. Since

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it was bought only a month ago, it is in

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perfect working condition and has

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valid for another ten months. Being a smart TV, with the help of wireless internet, you can get access to all social media applications.

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, it has

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mirroring feature as well. I will be finishing all my paperwork for the visa application by the end of

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week, post which we can catch up.

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, if you are free, you can come over on Sunday to see the television. We can speak at length and

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you can decide if you wish to purchase it or not. Let me know your thoughts Lots of love, Sonia

Mon Feb 17 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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208 words

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You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you are selling the television Describe the television Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it

Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects, while others believe that this is a waste of valuable school time.

Many developed countries are giving financial aid to poor countries. However, this hasn’t solved the problem of poverty in these nations and so other types of help are needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?