Some people say that museum should be free where as others opine that some entry fee should be there. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is generally argued by
few poeple
Suggestion
a few people
few people
the few people
that museums should have a free
entry
while others believe that it should have some
entry
fees. In my opinion, there should be no fees for the
museum
as
this
may deprive the low income people of their sole
entertainmnet
an activity that is diverting and that holds the attention
entertainment
.
on
Suggestion
On
the one hand
,
Accept space
,
people in favour of the
entry
fees believe that the
maintainence
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
of museums
require
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requires
funds which can only be accomplished with the
entry
fees. If the
governmnet
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
has to bear all the expenses of
museum
than they have to make deductions from other more important departments like health and education.
In other words
, the museums and art will be sustained at the cost of health and education of people so it does not seem to be a suitable bargain.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
when people will pay the tickets, it will generate a revenue which can be utilised
for
Suggestion
in
the
maintainence
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
of
museum
Suggestion
the museum
. On the other, some believe that
entry
should be free in all museums without a ticket or
entry
fees. They represent part of our culture and
traditions
Suggestion
tradition
, so if we want our values in the form of culture to flourish
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
it should be accessible to
every one
all people
everyone
and that too free. By imposing an
entry
fees
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fee
non affording and low income group will not be able to visit. It has
detrimental effect
Suggestion
a detrimental effect
detrimental effects
on well being of people as arts and
museum
are sources of pleasure and refreshment for these people.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
the tickets should be abolished. In conclusion, abolishing the
entry
fees for museums will cost the government
a
expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
a portion of
budget but
Suggestion
the budget, but
the budget but
it has several benefits in the form of entertainment to people which far outweighs the minimal strain it may cause on budget.
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