Some people say that museum should be free where as others opine that some entry fee should be there. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is generally argued by

few poeple

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a few people

few people

the few people

that museums should have a free

entry

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while others believe that it should have some

entry

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fees. In my opinion, there should be no fees for the

museum

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as

this

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may deprive the low income people of their sole

entertainmnet

an activity that is diverting and that holds the attention

entertainment

.

on

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On

the one hand

,

Accept space

,

people in favour of the

entry

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fees believe that the

maintainence

activity involved in maintaining something in good working order

maintenance

of museums

require

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requires

funds which can only be accomplished with the

entry

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fees. If the

governmnet

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

has to bear all the expenses of

museum

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than they have to make deductions from other more important departments like health and education.

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, the museums and art will be sustained at the cost of health and education of people so it does not seem to be a suitable bargain.

so

to a very great extent or degree

So

when people will pay the tickets, it will generate a revenue which can be utilised

for

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in

the

maintainence

activity involved in maintaining something in good working order

maintenance

of

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museum

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the museum

. On the other, some believe that

entry

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should be free in all museums without a ticket or

entry

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fees. They represent part of our culture and

traditions

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tradition

, so if we want our values in the form of culture to flourish

than

subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)

then

it should be accessible to

every one

all people

everyone

and that too free. By imposing an

entry

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fees

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fee

non affording and low income group will not be able to visit. It has

detrimental effect

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a detrimental effect

detrimental effects

on well being of people as arts and

museum

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are sources of pleasure and refreshment for these people.

so

to a very great extent or degree

So

the tickets should be abolished. In conclusion, abolishing the

entry

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fees for museums will cost the government

a

expresses position, direction or location, or point in time

at

a portion of

budget but

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the budget, but

the budget but

it has several benefits in the form of entertainment to people which far outweighs the minimal strain it may cause on budget.