Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

Advancement in modern technology is raising many questions, either in a positive
way
or in a negative
way
and the use of computers are getting increase rapidly in newly education
system
. Few people believe it as a rich trend, while the remaining think that it will generate dangerous outcomes. I partially agree with both the opinions and I would like to discuss both the
side
of the coin in the following paragraphs. To commence with the affirmative
side
, computers help students to learn the new things more practically. Computers give us a full overview of the working
system
, which do not only help us to get compatible with the computer cycle, as well as
thought
impart skills or knowledge to
taught
us enhanced features of modern education. From working on a
system
to
developing
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develop
a
system
, everything can be done by the advanced processing systems.
For example
, in many countries,
government
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the government
has made it mandatory for all the institutions to get involved with smart classes, because once a student from KERALA developed a mobile application with the help of experience earned from
PC
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a PC
, which can easily handle the security of a home.
Hence
, to achieve the goal of near future computers
should be use
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should be used
more in institutions. On the flip
side
, CPU's may effectively damage the youth. Because, PC consists of
internet server
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internet servers
the internet server
, which comprises of many adult contents, which can harm mental growth because adult movies contains
such
activities, which can result in dangerous outcomes.
Also
, a plethora of terrorist organisations utilise micro-computers for their purposes and it is
a
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an
easy
way
to catch the attention of any person.
For instance
, a large amount of people
move
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moves
to SYRIA, just because they saw some events online, which brainwashed themselves and forced them to join a terrorist field.
Thus
,
this
fact
can't be deny
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can't be denied
that computers may
also
produce dangerous outputs. To conclude,
mini-computers
a digital computer of medium size
minicomputers
have both the sides, where it can nourish students
by
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with
practical knowledge in a positive
way
,
also
it can play with their
mind
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minds
in a negative
way
. In my opinion, there
should be restriction
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should be a restriction
should be restricted
should be restricted restricted
should be restrictively
for every age group, which will allow to search only selected sites and by
this
the adverse
side
can be lower down.

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