Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Most of the people think that the

government

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is spending the

money

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on the arts and it could be good if

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money

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is spent on other things. The reason why people think like so is they don't see those arts in their day-to-day life due to the busy schedules. To my extent,

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agree with the people who are opposing the

government

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on spending of

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in the arts.

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government

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the government

should allot a less amount of

budget

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the budget

to the arts and should select the most visible places to the most of the people so that they can be effective.

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, most of the arts are washed out

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after a

rain

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may be due to the inadequate quality of

paints

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the paints

used by the artists during the painting.

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, arts made now-a-days on the wall were not just a painting they are made especially with a sculpture which expose outer to the wall and later they are painted.

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type of arts may

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a little bit more than the usual ones. Due to these types of arts the expenditure will be more than the

plane

extensive tract of level open land

plain

ones. The solution to the

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to reduce the

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could be selecting a little number of places for making

arts

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art

and that could be more

visible to

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visible, to

the most of the people who are travelling on that way. Use of paints made from

naturally

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natural

nature

with different

color

having color or a certain color; sometimes used in combination

coloured

flowers would be

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an

effective way for reducing the

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. Exposed sculptures over the wall should be mostly omitted and plane arts to be preferred.

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savings should be spent on other infrastructure facilities for the betterment of the locality. To conclude, the likely reason for wasting

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could be the making of more arts in the locality and most of them were not visible or seen by the people. In my opinion, the

government

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should select the optimistic locations which are effectively visible to the commuters.

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, the arts should be of plane ones than sculpture ones so that

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would be

get

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getting

reduced and can be used for the others betterment in the society.