In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

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Smoking not only is injurious to one’s

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deleterious in nature for others nearby as well. Many nations have now made smoking in public areas as illegal. I agree with

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notion, an array of reasons

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, passive smoking has detrimental effects on one’s health.

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is to say, the smoke emitting off a cigarette is as harmful to the one’s inhaling it, as for the ones who are smoking. To minimize the damage to others, many countries have passed a law which has deemed smoking in public as illegal. There are punishments ranging from hefty fines to even imprisonment for the ones breaking the smoking law. A recent study conducted in Italy shows, the number of cases of people getting affected had spiked to 43% in 2016 from 35% in 2018.

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, the authorities have successfully managed to curb the rising cases by imposing

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public areas.

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, smoking in a public place could be a bad influence to the children and teenagers. They could fall prey to

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bad practice and end up having a bad lifestyle. A study conducted by a magazine has shown, children and teenagers have an increasing percentage of picking bad habits and smoking being on the top of the list. It is vital for one to take responsibility to create awareness about how hazardous smoking can be. To sum up, deeming smoking

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public spaces as illegal is a right move. On a wider term,

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could be beneficial for the society as

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a whole

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Topic Vocabulary:

secondhand smoke
respiratory problems
cardiovascular disease
clean air
public health
hospital admissions
economic benefits
smoking cessation
cultural shift
healthcare costs
smoke-free laws
enforcement
designated smoking areas
compliance
social attitudes

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