You need to take leave from your IELTS Institute of over two weeks for personal reasons. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter. > Explain the reason. >The length of the leave you needed. >Explain how will you keep uptodate while are you away.

Dear Akhila, I am writing
this
to inform you that the possibility of taking 10 days leave from the class. The reason for taking leave, in my degree
certificate
there is an error in my
name
its
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it's
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only samjith but in my passport there is my full
name
Samjith
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,Samjith
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Thomas. While am applying for Canada permanent residence through
cannaprove
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canna prove
their staff verified my passports and degree certificates they found the
name
mistake in my
certificate
they told me that it may problem for educational credential assessment. So it is better to rectify the
name
as soon as possible for applying for permanent residence So I am planning to go to my university in Chennai to rectify my
certificate
. There is one of
friend's
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dad friend is working in a University he told me to come on, 12
/
10
/
2019 Sunday with the help of him the process of rectification will be easily within 7-10 days and I can get my
certificate
. I would really appreciate
to
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grant me
the
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apply
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leave from 12
/
10
/
19 to 22
/
10
/
19. I can assure you that I would do my IELTS Practices without any disruption I shall be very grateful if you would attend
this
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matter as soon as possible. Yours Sincerely
Samjith
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Smith
Thomas
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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