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school children are using computers in school more than ever. Discuss the advantages and disadvantage of this and give your own opinions

#school #children #computers
Desktop computer has become
indispensible
not to be dispensed with; essential
indispensable
 part of human
lives
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life
. It is used in all aspects
such
 organising data, research purpose
,
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,
and storing important documents
as a result
 student prefer spending
alot
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a lot
 of time on Personal computer.It has both pros and cons.
However
, if it is used in
correct manner
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the correct manner
 the advantages outweigh its disadvantage. On the positive side, it has made our lives easier and convenient as lot of
task
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tasks
 can be done thought it
such
 as, projects related to schools and colleges, PowerPoint presentations, storing files on drive which can be used for future
refrence
a remark that calls attention to something or someone
reference
references
, and important skills for self
devleopment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
developments
 like photoshop, coreldraw and Ms Excel to make them prepared to work in
business world
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the business world
 after being graduated from schools because all
this
 basic skills are required to be qualified for
work
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the work
. For an instant, multinational organisation require students to know how to
oprate
direct or control; projects, businesses, etc.
operate
computer
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a computer
,
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,
as most of the work is done for sending Emails, profit and loss data and SIP. On the other side, students have been using it for other purposes which has
lot
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lots
 of negative impact on them
such
 as
,
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,
playing video games all
day which
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day, which
,
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,
effects
the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion
affects
 their health and face problem of
obese
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obesity
,
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,
watching pornography
also
effects
have an effect upon
affects
 their studies
For example
, research done by
Redriver
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Red River
 University showed that 70% of students use P.C for unproductive way which has no
benifical
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
 towards their growth In conclusion, it has
lot
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lots
 of advantages over its disadvantaged
,
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,
Schools can block all the sites which are not applicable for a
chlid
a young person of either sex
child
 and parents can keep
eye
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an eye
 on them to check where, they
have been utilising
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have utilised
 that time.
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