Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree?

Crime is triggered by different motivation and divided

to

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into

different levels. Sending criminal into the jail is the most common method accepted by

public but

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the public, but

the public but

it is too narrow an approach. For some offenders,

knowledge studying

Accept comma addition

knowledge, studying

and job skill training is better than detention Some criminals who stealing money or robbing passengers just because they suffered from poverty. Most of them few received good education or accepted vocation training, which is less allowed to find a job to feed themselves or their family. Equipping them with employment skills is an essential approach to solve

this

problem, meanwhile improving their social identity. Apart from the criminal link to poverty, juvenile offenders are fit for educated. Youngsters who are not capable of

distinguish

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distinguishing

distinguished

legal or illegal

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

are easily swayed by adult criminal. Some of them chose

commit

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to commit

a crime to release their

emotion

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emotions

because neglected by family or abused by

parent

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a parent

parents

. It is necessary to help them to rebuild notions of morality and acquire adequate education to accept by society.

Furthermore

, spending time in prison may have

negative effect

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a negative effect

to

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in

on

the impressionable minds of youngsters and repentance of adults. They may make friend with repeat offenders who abet them offend again and losing

chance

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the chance

a chance

to back to the right way. The experience of prison may lead

to people treat them

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people to treat them

them to treat people

unfairly, which will stand in the way of their life in the future. Based on

above argument

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the above argument

, it is

easily

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easy

to

conclusion

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conclude

that education and training can address the root causes of crime, not only reduce

first

crime rates but

also

decrease re-

offender

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offending

rates.

This

is a perhaps long term solution, but it is

more realistic solution

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a more realistic solution

that maintains

society

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society's

stability.