The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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The growing trend of ready-made foods aid individuals to meet up the pace of modern

life style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

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being relieved from going into the kitchen to cook after a stressful day, the individual gain more relaxation time to himself / herself to rest or do more work.

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, he/she develops an unhealthy eating habit which in my opinion, outweighs the benefits. To be productive in modern lifestyle, one requires energy to keep up with the pace. While the energy is sourced from the

food

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we eat, time is

need

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needed

to prepare home-made foods to meet up with the energy need of the body. So, to gain more time to relax, eat and remain productive, fast foods becomes handy. They are readily available, close to our homes,

work place

a place where work is done

workplace

and of different dishes.

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eating habit can be costly to maintain.

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a plate of

jellof

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jell of

rice with chicken and salad

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a fast

food

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joint cost twice the cost of buying the ingredients and making

expresses position, direction or location, or point in time

the same

food

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at home. Individuals who cannot meet up with the cost implication of ready-made

food

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may become malnourished.

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, those who can buy

readymade

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ready made

food

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can over eat and become obese, both could be detrimental to health. In conclusion, I do believe that one may not always keep up with the demand of home-made

food

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, I encourage

occasional ready-made

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the occasional ready-made food

food

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to maintain healthy living

also

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needed in modern lifestyle.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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242 words

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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign

Task 2: Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, the government has tried to reduce traffic. For instance, they imposed a congestion tax during rush hour. Do you think this development is positive or negative?