Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

We are currently living in the world where surviving with one persons income in the family is being difficult.

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economic situation has encouraged both the parent to work in order to

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put in effect

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their basic needs. A Couple who works and have children believe that other family members can take

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of their children in their absence. While few parents believe child

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centres are the best place to leave their children when they aren'

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available.

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essay will discuss why daycare centres provide best

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to

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for

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

in their

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parents'

parent's

absence but

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absence, but

why still leaving them at relatives is more beneficial. Child

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centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

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have gained parents trust and made them to leave their kids at their place while they are working. Since these centres provide a lot of additional activities like sports and entertainment which enables kids to learn new things and

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kids involved in these activities makes them not think about their parents while they aren'

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there.

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, my neighbours kids who went to daycare centre earlier have a clear knowledge of basic English than kids who don'

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go to these centres. Learning new things and not thinking much about parents helps working parents to leave their kids at child

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centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

while they are working.

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child

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centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

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teach new things, some parents still feel leaving them at their relatives helps them not to worry about their kid's safety. As family members

definietly

without question and beyond doubt

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take more

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as they all are one family and preaching good values enable parents to not worry about their kids when they aren'

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available.

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, Ram is considered to be a good boy in the class and the reason behind it is because his grandmother preached him all the good values when he was a kid. Kid safety and learning good habits are the two main reasons which makes employed parents to leave their kids at their relatives place. Both wife and husband are working together to make their family life's even more better which helps them to

fullfil

put in effect

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their desires.

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essay discussed why daycare centres provide superior

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for kids

who's

of which person?

whose

parents are

employed but

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employed, but

why leaving them at their relatives is more

benificial

promoting or enhancing well-being

beneficial

. In my opinion, considering

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kids'

safety, it's better to leave

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the children

at known persons house rather than day

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centres.