WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. These days. too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine. rather than by following a healthy lifestyle. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Health care system

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The health care system

has progressed in leaps and bounds over the past decades. New medical strategies, advices and online researches are being created and developed all the time, and it is inevitable that people want to the depend on them. What is

important how

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important, how

they are used. I tend to

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that if they properly employed

for

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in

changing the personal lifestyle, it would be better than relying on doctors or medicine. No one can deny that healthy lifestyle makes many human' s safer and

healther

improved in health or physical condition

healthier

. If teenagers follow low-

calories

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calorie

nituration

system

besides

daily

exercise practicing

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exercise, practicing

,

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,

for example

, their health

are being maintained

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is being maintained

without clinical staff.

Also

, that encourages their parents and friend,

for instance

. They have welcomed to challenge themselves and outweigh the

opisticals

of starting new healthy routine. Having made these points, it is true that every individual healthy manner

recieves

conforming to the established language usage of educated native speakers

received

receives

some criticism, and perhaps

this

is

good thing

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a good thing

.

It' s

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It's

perfectly possible that not easy to stable all your days' healthy

habbits

an established custom

habits

habit

or even to be protected from abusing some supplements or sport sophisticated equipments. If

this

ware

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

were

to happen, I would agree with the view that has a tendency of consulting a personal doctor to organize

you

of you or yourself

your

day.

Untimately

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Ultimately

, it is up to us to ensure that self healthy tips are used wisely. Generally,

this

is happens

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happens

has happened

and people who complain are often

tos

plural of that

those

thus

to

impatient or too short-sighted to see the

benifits

financial assistance in time of need

benefits

of having

well-defined lifestyle

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a well-defined lifestyle

.

However

, that does not mean we should not visit

specialist doctor

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a specialist doctor

gradually to overall check your health.