You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: describe what the group does explain why the group is good for the community suggest alternative days and times for practice

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Johnson I am one of the members of a musical group which have been meeting for a couple of months in the community hall to practice music together and get ready for a festival which will be held 2 months from now. I am writing

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letter to inform you that we have been told we won’t be allowed to meet our

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on the specific days of the week, which we used to. Our meetings were on every week Tuesday and Friday.

This

group has had a positive impact on the community since our

first

performance

last

year and we had great feedback from people

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from 18 to 60 and they

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tried to raise funds for our group after they watched our hard work. I want to ask you if it is possible for you to allow us

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meeting in

community

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hall even if the days would differ from what

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used to be. I was thinking

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Mondays and Thursdays as an alternative if we could manage it together. I would be grateful if I hear from you and know your decision on our condition. Sincerely Arian Abolfazli