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More and more people are now moving away from an agricultural background to cities for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solution you can offer?

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Many individuals now tend to migrate to urban areas rather than staying in rural areas. The main reason for
this
 migration is to find jobs. While
this
 migration can benefit them eventually, there are
also
 some problems involved. Those living in the countryside mostly depend on natural resources
such
 as cattle and farmlands for their survival. Many farmers are totally dependent on agricultural lands. Unfortunately, uncertain rains, snowfalls and cyclones damage the entire crops in
such
 a way that farmers end up in ultimate frustration and commit suicide.
This
 is why, nowadays, many people
move
Suggestion
are moving
 to cities to look for a job, which gives them at least a fixed source of income.
However
, moving to cities does not always prove beneficial to many people. The decision to search for a job is money driven and most people cannot easily adjust to the life in the city.
Secondly
, they have to struggle for their basic needs and
also
 for the education of their kids.
Finally
, the hectic lifestyle and pollution in cities affect their health. Since many of the rural people lack skills, they may end up getting a low paying job and
this
 could make them even more depressed. To overcome
this
 problem,
more practical
Suggestion
most practical
 solutions are required.
For instance
, a co-operative dairy can be opened so that farmers keeping / raising cattle can sell milk to dairy and can earn a
second
 income. Small scale industries
such
 as textiles, sugar or oil
industry which
Accept comma addition
industry, which
 runs on agricultural products can
also
 prove effective. The government can provide funding
to
Suggestion
for
such
 industries and the products can be made available at a subsidised cost for farmers. In conclusion, I would say those living in the agricultural background should try alternative income sources as migrating to a city can add to their problems.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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