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Some people believe that students study more efficiently in groups; others,however,argue that studying separately is better. Discuss the advantages of both ways and give your own opinion.

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It
Suggestion
It's
 generally believed that students these days
study
 quite differently from how their past counterparts did.
it
Suggestion
It
 is partly due to modern educational systems
,
Accept space
,
and partly because of the accessibility of information technology. It is evident that studying in a
group
 brings a number of benefits to every individual in the
group
.
First
 and foremost, students can discuss their problems openly with their peers when they
study
 in a
group
. They,
as a result
, receive various suggestions from different members of the
group
, which help them develop new skills and broaden their horizons. What is more, the competitive nature of the individuals in a
group
 promotes more critical thinking and creativity as new questions and explanations
emarge
come out into view, as from concealment
emerge
emerged
image
 within discussions and debates.
On the other hand
, it cannot be ignored that studying separately has some perceived benefits too.
Firstly
, when someone studies alone, unlike studying in groups, they have a
quite
with little or no activity or no agitation ('quiet' is a nonstandard variant for 'quietly')
quiet
 environment to
study
 in.
This
 allows them to concentrate more on their
study
, which in turn help better understanding.
Moreover
, students get more time and
flexiblility
the property of being flexible; easily bent or shaped
flexibility
 when they
study
 separately. They,
therefore
, can
study
 at their convenience.
Furthermore
, studying alone boosts an individual's self esteem since they have to work on their own. In conclusion, I tend to think studying in a
group
 brings more benefits to students than studying alone does. I,
therefore
, believe students should be encouraged to
study
 in groups. The
group
 should,
however
, consist of only four or six people.

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