Task 1-Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

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Dear Paritosh, I’m so glad to hear you’re thinking about learning to drive! Having a license offers amazing freedom—you’re no longer tied to bus schedules, and you can go wherever you want, whenever you want. Plus, if you ever need to commute to a new city, it’ll make life much easier. For a driving school, I highly recommend DriveSmart in Kenowa—it’s where I went, and the instructors are fantastic. They let me work with the same instructor throughout, which helped me feel confident and prepared. Their in-person theory classes are

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very efficient, wrapping up faster than the online ones. One tip: practice as much as possible, especially parking and handling different road situations. It’ll make a big difference when you’re driving alone for the first time. Let me know how it goes! I’m sure you’ll do great, and I’m excited for you to get on the road. Yours lovingly, Parthvi

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Task Achievement

While the letter addresses all parts of the task, adding more specific details about driving license advantages or tips could enhance the completeness.

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single clear idea to enhance readability.

Task Achievement

The letter maintains a friendly and supportive tone, which is appropriate for the situation.

Coherence and Cohesion

The inclusion of personal experience with the driving school adds authenticity and reliability to the recommendation.

Coherence and Cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriately warm and personal, fitting the context of a letter to a friend.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

151 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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