You have finished a course. Write a letter to the course organizer to give your feedback. In your letter include: - the details of the course, - what you enjoyed during the course, - any suggestions you would have.

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Dear Sir, My name is Yen, and I am a student of Nguyen Thi Minh Khai Gifted school. I am writing

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letter to supply my feedback to

organizer

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about the

course

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I have enjoyed. I have completed a certificate

course

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Computer

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Centre. The

course

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I attended was

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five months. For the duration of the

course

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, I gradually get used to a

computer

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how to use it well. Each period, student

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given amount of exercises about skills, operating my own

computer

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, etc… I feel very comfortable when I studied here because almost teachers are friendly and well-trained. So, I am

confidient

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confident

after finishing

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course

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and I think I can be able to use my own

computer

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fluently.

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, I suggest the computers here should be repaired and updated regularly as soon as that student can use

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quickly. If the organizer accepts

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suggestion is given, the

course

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becomes better. Thank you very much for listening

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me. I look forward to hearing from you.

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faithfully, Yen

Wed Feb 19 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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